Help me draft this networking email...

[shopgirl07]

Hi Mary,

It was so nice to meet you at xyz function! I really enjoyed talking with you about company x and our similar backgrounds. I'd love to take you to coffee when your schedule opens up in a few weeks, let me know what's convenient for you and we can schedule something. Thanks so much!

sbp

I think short and simple is fine.

[Deleted]

Here's something to get you started....

It was nice to meet you at X location last week. Thank you for sharing information about the work you do at x, y, z.

Would you be available for a 15-30 minute chat at a coffee shop sometime during the beginning of October, so I may learn more about the work that you do? I'm most available during lunch or after 6 pm.

I look forward to hearing from you.

[Deleted]

I just wrote a bunch of networking emails and they're always so nerve wracking. Now to obsessively recheck my email until people start responding!