Which wording sounds better?

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Which wording sounds better? Nov 28, 2014 7:22:32 GMT -5

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Post by shortstax on Nov 28, 2014 7:22:32 GMT -5

I just need a quick 2nd opinion.

I want to get this for my SIL who loves to bake pies:
gifts.redenvelope.com/gifts/personalized-stoneware-pie-dish-30115461?ref=HomeNoRef&q=pie&viewpos=1&trackingpgroup=productsearch

I originally wanted to put something like "Made with love in Mary's Kitchen" (stolen from other personalized cookware on that site, lol) but now I see that there's a 20 character limit.

One suggestion on the site is "Mary's famous pie" which could work. Can you think of another short way to say "from Mary's kitchen" but cute (think "taking to church potlucks cute"---that's her style.)

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VillainV Elder Posts: 23,468 Likes: 29,446	Which wording sounds better? Nov 28, 2014 7:35:03 GMT -5 via Tapatalk shortstax likes this Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by VillainV on Nov 28, 2014 7:35:03 GMT -5 Mary's Secret Recipe From Mary's Kitchen (I think that's cute) Mary made this
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shortstax Senior Member Posts: 5,542 Likes: 7,324	Which wording sounds better? Nov 28, 2014 8:45:23 GMT -5 explorer2001 likes this Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by shortstax on Nov 28, 2014 8:45:23 GMT -5 Mary's Masterpiece (?) I'm making this too hard on myself, aren't I?
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Which wording sounds better?

Post by shortstax on Nov 28, 2014 7:22:32 GMT -5

Post by VillainV on Nov 28, 2014 7:35:03 GMT -5

Post by shortstax on Nov 28, 2014 8:45:23 GMT -5