Anyone want to help me design a spanish spiritwear shirt?

[karinothing]

My kids go to an immersion school. I am working on designing the spiritwear and we need to have a spanish shirt. In the past we have had things such as 

1) Aprendemos en dos idiomas (we learn in two languages) 
2) Mantén la calma y habla español (keep calm and speak spanish) 
3) Paz * Amor * (school mascot)  (Peace, love, school mascot) 

This year I was thinking something like this but in Spanish 


i.etsystatic.com/38427934/r/il/8adb66/4874304089/il_fullxfull.4874304089_9jt3.jpg

It says 

Learn a Language
Share a Culture
Change the World
School Name 

The designer originally kept it three lines, but then each line merges together so it looks like 

Aprenda un idioma Comparta una
cultura Cambie el mundo Escuela

and so on. I don't like it because I want each line to be its own line. I can break it into 4. Do I keep the wavy? Do I make it straight? DO I keep the three main lines wavy and make the school straight? Four wavy lines seems like a lot?

Any other ideas? Was this super confusing?

[TR]

Could you do the three wavy lines of the sayings on the front and have the school name on the back?

[mrsukyankee]

What about keeping the 3 lines and then use a circle with the name of the school under 'the world', if it could fit (or the initials of the school if it is ever used that way).

[karinothing]

Aug 26, 2024 9:48:24 GMT -5 TR said:

Could you do the three wavy lines of the sayings on the front and have the school name on the back?

Oh! I will ask. I think two designs costs us more money lol. 

[karinothing]

Aug 26, 2024 9:51:47 GMT -5 mrsukyankee said:

What about keeping the 3 lines and then use a circle with the name of the school under 'the world', if it could fit (or the initials of the school if it is ever used that way).

Sadly, our initials spell out something we don't want on a t-shirt lol. 

[emilyinchile]

I would see how it looks if you replace one set of stars with the school logo, if that would be enough "school" for you guys. I don't hate the idea of 4 lines, but it's going to change the overall look of the design because it's going to take up so much more space on the torso.

[karinothing]

Aug 26, 2024 10:05:26 GMT -5 emilyinchile said:

I would see how it looks if you replace one set of stars with the school logo, if that would be enough "school" for you guys. I don't hate the idea of 4 lines, but it's going to change the overall look of the design because it's going to take up so much more space on the torso.

Oh, i like that. I was thinking no more sparkles and maybe change the font to something less girly too?

[nicolewi]

Maybe just drop a line?

Learn a language
Change the World
School Name

[karinothing]

Some other versions I have seen on-line 


www.spreadshirt.com/shop/design/learn+a+language+share+a+culture+change+the+world+mens+t-shirt-D65176a6d354894617ffe88c6?sellable=BqobOvgGv4HJM0XAqOxm-210-7

mazezy.com/uk/products/learn-language-share-culture-change-world-languages-long-shirt-wXJbx7UACZbk

[karinothing]

Also if anyone else has any ideas I will gladly take them! (like for completely different shirts).

This is a completely different idea that is much simpler I just like the message of the other one.

www.rushuniform.com/wp-content/uploads/2022/07/Aspira-LS-Somos-Tee.png

[mrsukyankee]

Aug 26, 2024 10:12:03 GMT -5 karinothing said:

Some other versions I have seen on-line 


www.spreadshirt.com/shop/design/learn+a+language+share+a+culture+change+the+world+mens+t-shirt-D65176a6d354894617ffe88c6?sellable=BqobOvgGv4HJM0XAqOxm-210-7

mazezy.com/uk/products/learn-language-share-culture-change-world-languages-long-shirt-wXJbx7UACZbk

Of these I like the first one better.

You could also do two circles with each line being either the top or bottom part of a circle and the school name could be the fourth.