Will you read my ph.d. admission essay?

jennistarr1 Senior Member Posts: 8,105 Likes: 4,686	Will you read my ph.d. admission essay? Jan 8, 2013 16:15:55 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by jennistarr1 on Jan 8, 2013 16:15:55 GMT -5 It's only 1 page, I could use some strangers feed back...maybe you could PM your email and I could send it to you
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niemand88f Full Member Posts: 2,892 Likes: 1,917	Will you read my ph.d. admission essay? Jan 8, 2013 16:51:43 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by niemand88f on Jan 8, 2013 16:51:43 GMT -5 What is the field?
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jennistarr1 Senior Member Posts: 8,105 Likes: 4,686	Will you read my ph.d. admission essay? Jan 8, 2013 20:27:44 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by jennistarr1 on Jan 8, 2013 20:27:44 GMT -5 Oh good point...I'm in the psychology field applying for a Ph.D. in Public Policy with a health policy focus
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chia Full Member Posts: 3,095 Likes: 693	Will you read my ph.d. admission essay? Jan 8, 2013 22:19:14 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by chia on Jan 8, 2013 22:19:14 GMT -5 Y.G.EMail!
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jennistarr1 Senior Member Posts: 8,105 Likes: 4,686	Will you read my ph.d. admission essay? Jan 8, 2013 22:24:00 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by jennistarr1 on Jan 8, 2013 22:24:00 GMT -5 Thank you CHIA!!!!
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chia Full Member Posts: 3,095 Likes: 693	Will you read my ph.d. admission essay? Jan 8, 2013 22:35:10 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by chia on Jan 8, 2013 22:35:10 GMT -5 Let me know if for some reason it doesn't come through... it's not showing up in my sent mail box (but, I usually don't use yahoo - so, I could be missing it...)
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Will you read my ph.d. admission essay? Jan 8, 2013 23:18:42 GMT -5

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Post by jennistarr1 on Jan 8, 2013 23:18:42 GMT -5

It came through...and I read through your awesome suggestions...I'll tease through it a bit more at work tomorrow. But thank you...and I'll let you know when I hear something. What luck I have though...you offered before you knew it was smack dab right up your alley!!!

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jennistarr1 Senior Member Posts: 8,105 Likes: 4,686	Will you read my ph.d. admission essay? Jan 9, 2013 9:56:20 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by jennistarr1 on Jan 9, 2013 9:56:20 GMT -5 maybe I can apply the changes that Chia suggested then send it you for a 2nd opinion and grammar fix up
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Will you read my ph.d. admission essay?

Post by jennistarr1 on Jan 8, 2013 16:15:55 GMT -5

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