I have completed a collage.

[Ohhmm(bligo)]

How's THIS for majestic as hell, everyjuan?



What do we think?  Nothing is glued down yet.  Obviously, I am only committed to one piece.
Less pieces?  Colored background?

[Ohhmm(bligo)]

The theme is THE BIRD. I tried to find pieces that would make the bird make sense.

As if the bird needs explanation.

[lime]

Huh. I feel like I am missing some background here.

Especially the hummingbird with the ballet attire.

[Deleted]

More pieces. No white space. All overlapping and shit.

[Ohhmm(bligo)]

Nov 12, 2013 18:37:21 GMT -5 lime said:

Huh. I feel like I am missing some background here.

Especially the hummingbird with the ballet attire.

NEEDS.  NO.  EXPLANATION.

[lissaholly]

Did you do the bird? I fucking love it!!

I feel like you need more birds. Like a flamingo. Also, if you are going to have negative space it needs to be part of the composition. Like everything is up and there is a solid rectangle on the bottom because birds are perched in trees and legs are long like tree trunks reaching up. Maybe I rambling, I just love theory.

[Ohhmm(bligo)]

Ooo, I thought it needed more pieces too, but I took some out because there is SO much space in the background of the example!!

[lime]

Nov 12, 2013 18:38:37 GMT -5 Ohhmm(bligo) said:

Nov 12, 2013 18:37:21 GMT -5 lime said:

Huh. I feel like I am missing some background here.

Especially the hummingbird with the ballet attire.

NEEDS.  NO.  EXPLANATION.

LOL

The first thing I noticed about the bird is that she has a tight little ass. Probably from dancing. Wouldn't we all like a tight ass like that?

So, work in a piece with an ass cheek or two. I'm kidding....or am I...?

[Ohhmm(bligo)]

Ok. I looked through the gallery, and everyone else is submitting fuller ones, as I initially was going to do and like you guys want.

BREAK!

[Ohhmm(bligo)]

Nov 12, 2013 18:42:00 GMT -5 nicbreeful said:

People. How do you not know about the bird?? Sheesh!

Haven't they heard?

[Ohhmm(bligo)]

Nov 12, 2013 19:02:02 GMT -5 @cse1960 said:

You have NOT completed a collage. What is the overarching theme here?

It's a word.

[Ohhmm(bligo)]

BA BA BA BIRBIRBIR, BIRD IS THE WORD

[vicky]

Less white space, more bird.

[Ohhmm(bligo)]

Nov 12, 2013 19:22:13 GMT -5 everyjuan said:

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OMG! I'm in love!

I agree with everyone else who said to fill it up more. Could you add some more drawing/ink elements to balance out that part with the magazine clippings?

If the theme is "the bird," could he maybe have an audience of or be gracefully crowd surfing on too of a group of middle fingers? Maybe you could find pictures of a bunch of hands, cut out the middle finders, and like collage them all together.

Just an idea. You're the one with the creative genius! Haha

No, I'm not putting him upside down anymore, the grading assistant has pleased me!

However, there is now a "You're Great In Bed" award going on it.

[alzi]

Nov 12, 2013 19:11:24 GMT -5 Ohhmm(bligo) said:

BA BA BA BIRBIRBIR, BIRD IS THE WORD

Lofl