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Post by teamhayes on Aug 21, 2017 20:13:35 GMT -5

Trying to order a quick invite tonight and I know what I want to say but it's. Not coming out great

Basically Crosby is having a baptism and we are combining that with Sullivan's 2nd Birthday to cut down in annoying people with so many parties

How do I word that?

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Kellen 4/27/12
Miller 6/30/13
Sullivan 9/4/15
Crosby 3/1/17

teamhayes Elder Enter your message here... Posts: 22,906 Likes: 18,293	Wording help Aug 21, 2017 20:14:29 GMT -5 via mobile Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by teamhayes on Aug 21, 2017 20:14:29 GMT -5 This is what I have and it sounds clunky Following the baptism join us at our home. Let's celebrate a Crosby's Bapism and Sullivan turning TWO!
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teamhayes Elder Enter your message here... Posts: 22,906 Likes: 18,293	Wording help Aug 21, 2017 20:20:18 GMT -5 via mobile Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by teamhayes on Aug 21, 2017 20:20:18 GMT -5 Cheesy? Two times the giggles and double the fun, twice as exciting as a party for one Following the baptism join us at our home as we celebrate Crosby and Sullivan Turning two
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teamhayes Elder Enter your message here... Posts: 22,906 Likes: 18,293	Wording help Aug 21, 2017 20:27:33 GMT -5 via mobile Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by teamhayes on Aug 21, 2017 20:27:33 GMT -5 Double the blessings, double the fun! Twice as exciting as a party for one! Join us .....c's baptism and Sullivan turning two!
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teamhayes Elder Enter your message here... Posts: 22,906 Likes: 18,293	Wording help Aug 21, 2017 20:30:43 GMT -5 via mobile Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by teamhayes on Aug 21, 2017 20:30:43 GMT -5 Two celebrations in one Join us for double the fun
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fryjack2 Elder Posts: 14,781 Likes: 18,822	Wording help Aug 21, 2017 20:42:14 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by fryjack2 on Aug 21, 2017 20:42:14 GMT -5 Aug 21, 2017 20:30:43 GMT -5 teamhayes said: Two celebrations in one Join us for double the fun I like this one the best. Its simple, to the point, and not too cheesy. You can make the background picture fun or cheesy
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teamhayes Elder Enter your message here... Posts: 22,906 Likes: 18,293	Wording help Aug 21, 2017 20:53:24 GMT -5 via mobile Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by teamhayes on Aug 21, 2017 20:53:24 GMT -5 Twice as exciting as a party for one Two celebrations is double the fun
	Back to Top Kellen 4/27/12 Miller 6/30/13 Sullivan 9/4/15 Crosby 3/1/17

teamhayes Elder Enter your message here... Posts: 22,906 Likes: 18,293	Wording help Aug 21, 2017 20:54:52 GMT -5 via mobile Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by teamhayes on Aug 21, 2017 20:54:52 GMT -5 Picture is pretty cheesy!
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teamhayes Elder Enter your message here... Posts: 22,906 Likes: 18,293	Wording help Aug 21, 2017 21:12:11 GMT -5 via mobile Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by teamhayes on Aug 21, 2017 21:12:11 GMT -5 Ordered ! Thanks
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